Oh gosh!What can we do? We are in very big troubles...Do we have to say the truth? Lie to him?...Oh but wait, thats wrong! I'm not gonna lie to my father....or...no,no I definitely not gonna lie to him.
But the big question is what can we do¿? Run away.. is not a bad option...but Huey doesn`t run so fast so as to escape quickly!.. What else.. what else,... oh yes! we can prepare another pudding!, oh but, we don`t have the time and the ingredients, neither the kitchen.
Dad is going to get angry, really angry... and that is not going to have good consequenses.
Maybe we are going to be punished, and pudding was really important for him. And we ruined it. We will have to tell him the truth, he doesn`t deserve a lie, we have to accept the consequenses...
Oh there he comes....
Very well done. You achieve to communicate the tone of desperation Julian must have had. It´s good that you portray the boy´s dilemma: lying or telling the truth. Another thing you could have added is a reflection on the possible consequences the boys will have to face. What does Julian expect his father will do to him?
ResponderEliminarNice work,
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